Subverting Tropes in YA Fiction

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Tropes are recurring character types and plot devices often specific to a genre or readership. They can be an important part of the genre’s identity and as comforting as a well-worn blanket to devoted readers. Some are non-negotiable; for example, a romance writer would be taking a big risk not to end with a happily ever after. 

That said, we should write the books we want to read, and that often means shaking things up a bit and subverting tropes. When I began writing my young adult cozy mystery series, Sweet Dreams Mysteries, there were several YA tropes I knew right away I wanted to upend. 

Romantic subplot (for the main character)

I can’t remember the last time I read a YA book that didn’t have a romantic subplot for the main character. When I envisioned my MC for Sweet Dreams, she was energetic, ambitious, and head-over-heels in love—with her job. Genevieve is a natural entrepreneur and wholly dedicated to her family’s ice cream shop. If she has time to daydream, she’s not pining over love interests, but creating new recipes. She has a fulfilling life with school, work, and her refreshingly platonic and drama-free friendship with BFF Brandon Summers. When thinking about the YA book I wanted to read, this was what I most needed: a girl who didn’t need a romantic relationship to complete her identity. 

Dead parent(s) (or neglectful/abusive/clueless parents)

This one has been talked about to death (ha), but the trope is still so prevalent in YA fiction. The idea is teens need the adults out of the way so they can solve their own conflicts; therefore, there are many fatal car accidents (I’m guilty of it too). The fortunate parents who manage to survive in YA fiction are usually shockingly clueless or neglectful. For the Sweet Dreams series, I wanted to include a mother who loves her daughter but leaves her in the hands of a very capable father so she can pursue her dream career. As for my MC’s father, he can be a little overprotective at times, but he’s not an oaf, nor is he neglectful. Genevieve manages to solve her own problems perfectly well, even with a loving, well-adjusted dad who cooks her breakfast every morning.

Burning desire to break away from hometown

Maybe it’s my country roots; I grew up in Cheyenne, Wyoming, and spent years waiting tables in truck stops to the tune of country music, which romanticizes the charms of small-town life and strong family bonds. I wanted to write a YA book featuring a teenage main character who loved her hometown and didn’t want to leave. Genevieve is ambitious, but she’s perfectly content channeling her ambitions into the family business. She cherishes the tight-knit community in the small mountain town where she was raised, and when she pictures her future, it looks very much the same—creating new recipes and happily serving customers in Sweet Dreams Ice Cream Parlour. She can’t imagine living farther than a stone’s throw from her father or her beloved Aunt Mellie. So does this make her small minded? Not in my book. 

Bookish main character

I get it; we write what we know, and for most of us what we know is a love for bookstores, libraries, and rainy days curled under a comforter with a hot beverage and a book. But I’m tired of reading this main character. For Sweet Dreams, I instead gave the above qualities to my MC’s BFF, a boy whose parents own a quaint downtown bookstore. Brandon is the bookworm, Brandon is the coffee lover, the quieter one, the one who loves reading on rainy days. Genevieve? She hates reading. She is bored by the very idea of lying idle on an afternoon, she’d rather poke her eyes out than engage in literary analysis, and she is an extrovert to the extreme. Her favorite place to be is not at home but in her brightly lit, cheerful ice cream shop, especially when it’s full of chatty customers. Like most writers I am an introvert through and through; I’d rather be home, I’d rather be reading. But I also get tired of reading about characters like me. 

Check out the first book in the Sweet Dreams series here!

Sweet Surprise: Happy Book Birthday to My Debut Cozy Mystery!

Today I am THRILLED to announce the publication of my debut cozy mystery, Murder by MilkshakeIf the title seems familiar, that’s because I first published it in installments years ago on Amazon’s serialized story platform, Kindle Vella. Murder by Milkshake did well on Vella—in seven weeks it earned more than my traditionally published book earned in seven years—but I always imagined it as a mass market paperback (and ebook, of course!). Today, that dream comes true.

The idea for the Sweet Dreams series goes back to the winter of 2019. Back then I was reading a lot of cozy mysteries, and also a lot of young adult fiction. It occured to me these two categories could be combined. Most YA at the time was pretty dark; the only lighthearted options tended to be romance. There were dark academia mysteries, and plenty of thrillers and horror, but nothing like a Scooby-Doo type mystery—something short and sweet, a little silly, and a lot of fun.

I started scribbling down ideas for a series that would feature a sprightly teenage heroine, her bookish best friend, and their charming small mountain town in northern Arizona. The teenage characters would solve crimes when not at school or working at their parents’ respective downtown shops.

The boy’s shop, I knew, would be a bookstore with a cafe, but I wasn’t sure about my main character. She was spirited, cheerful, energetic, and definitely not bookish. I considered a 50s-style diner, or a quirky antique store. And then, later that year, my daughter got her first job—at Baskin Robbins. She looked so cute in her pink uniform hat, and she always came home smelling like ice cream and waffle cones. So I gave my main character an ice cream shop, and I called it Sweet Dreams. 

Like I’ve said before, I have never had as much fun writing a book as this one. Obviously it is very different from my usual work, which is literary in nature and melancholy in tone. Cozy mysteries in contrast are bubbly, plot-driven, humorous, and fun. It’s been a blast switching gears and writing commercial fiction, and I hope you enjoy reading this book as much as I’ve enjoyed writing it. If you do, you’re in luck, because the next entry in the Sweet Dreams series comes out in October!

Get your copy of Murder by Milkshake here.

Celebrating Halloween with a New Story

This Halloween I’m celebrating for several reasons. One is simply the fact that, to me, it’s the most wonderful time of the year. When wreaths of snarled twigs and black roses show up in the stores alongside pumpkins, sugar skulls, and shelves full of candy, it signals the end of summer. And for us desert dwellers, that is a blessed relief.

Another reason to celebrate is that today I’m editing the final chapter of my book The House on Linden Way. I wrote about this work-in-progress last September, but back then I called it my maybe-novel. That’s because I often start a story with the intention of writing a book, but instead end up writing a long short story. I was thrilled when this one chose to stay with me a little longer. Now my once maybe-novel is a full-length manuscript—revised, polished, and on its way tomorrow to my beta readers.

Finally, I’m excited to announce that my short story “The Lost Girls” was published today in YA Review Net (YARN). This story was formerly known as “The Shell of Light” and won runner-up in YARN’s 2017 Halloween Fiction Contest. It’s a favorite of mine for the same reason Halloween is my favorite holiday: I love the moody imagery and Gothic gloom of October stories. I keep my Halloween screen saver on all year long, and I’m a sucker for literature and films depicting crumbling castles, misty graveyards, dark forests, decaying mansions, ghosts and goblins or, in this case, a night out trick-or-treating gone horribly wrong.

I wrote “The Lost Girls” to a prompt given to me by my then seven-year-old son, so this one’s for him, although it’ll be a few more years before he’s allowed to read it. You don’t have to wait though. Click here to read “The Lost Girls,” and Happy Halloween!

Read My New Story “From Autumn to June”

This week YA Review Network published my short story “From Autumn to June.” I wrote this piece last spring and was thrilled when YARN sent an acceptance letter over the summer. Having worked with them previously on my story “We Never Get to Talk Anymore” and again on a piece that will be published in October, I knew my work was in good hands.

“From Autumn to June” was one of those rare stories that almost seemed to write itself. It’s as if it were there all along, just waiting to be discovered. When that happens it feels like magic, and it’s the best part of being a writer.

Another great thing about being a writer is getting to see the world through different points of view. This particular story explores a very sensitive subject from a perspective not often considered or given a voice. While researching, I was surprised to discover how prevalent this issue is—I found several support groups on various platforms dedicated to those struggling with it.

At first I wasn’t sure how to approach the narrative. Remembering how much I loved reading Barbara Kingsolver’s letters to her mother and daughter in Small Wonder, I thought I’d try the same. The style, called epistolary, has an eloquent way of capturing intimacy. I love how it turned out, and I hope you do too.

Read “From Autumn to June” here.

In Good Company

I didn’t set out to write a YA novel. I just wanted to write a book. Afterwards at a conference, when asked to identify the book’s genre, I proudly declared it “literary fiction.”

The panelist groaned. “Oh, don’t call it that,” he said. “When you say ‘literary fiction’ people’s eyes will roll back in their heads.”

I thought that was pretty funny, and it knocked me off my high horse, but I didn’t know what else to call the book. After some research (hint—do this before you write a book, not after), I knew I’d written a young adult novel.

But I didn’t want to admit it. Why? I’ll tell you—only please don’t judge me too harshly.

I was afraid I wouldn’t be taken seriously.

There are many people in the literary community who look down on the young adult genre. They were practically salivating when J.K. Rowling’s adult novel debuted, couldn’t wait to tear it to pieces—believing an author who writes “for kids” can’t write for adults as well. (Anyone who believes this really needs to check out Maile Meloy.)

I imagined the thin, condescending smiles on faces of other writers who asked what kind of book I’d written. “Oh. A young adult novel. Are there vampires in it?”

It’s such a narrow and misguided view that it shouldn’t bother me, but like most writers I’m rather thin-skinned and sensitive to criticism.

Which is my problem. And I’m so over it.

Because while perusing the YA section in a bookstore a few months ago (one worker told me to hang on while he found someone else to help me, because he doesn’t read anything in the YA section), I came across these:

The Last Unicorn, by Peter S. Beagle. Oh, my. How had I not discovered this yet? I bought it and read it aloud to my son over the next several weeks. If only I could write an entire novel this lovely and perfect . . .

Something Wicked This Way Comes, by Ray Bradbury. A huge inspiration. I used this as a comp title for my novel since it’s also written in third person and incorporates an adult point of view (rare for young adult). Would I love to say my book is a fraction as cool as this one? Of course, but I wouldn’t dare.

Maniac Magee, by Jerry Spinelli. I recognized this book because my 6th-grade daughter had it assigned last year. One Friday, she left her copy at school, so we went to the library and checked out another. Now that we had two, I started reading one, and couldn’t put it down. I would have been proud to write this book.

Speaking of 6th-graders, I recently had the chance to sit in on their Socratic discussion of another assigned novel, and wow. Nothing gets by them. They debated themes, metaphors, symbolism, foreshadowing, character growth, conflict and climax, denouement—and they did it with passion and intelligence and humor.

I couldn’t help thinking of the adult titles topping the bestseller lists. Wait—my book is going to be shelved in the young adult section? Yes, please!